Sketchdump1(Redone)

Initially, I uploaded this -->icequeen4483.deviantart.com/ar… for a simple critique from *
Since she told me something was off, I decided to redraw it digitally instead and I have to say that I'm quite happy with how this turned out!
Yes I tweaked some things but I had to! It's the small details that really bug me .
*Lay your critiques on me! I can take 'em!  
EDIT: Fixed the issue with the right eye. Thanks to for pointing that out ^^
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